NaPoWriMo ~ Day 5 ~ Frank Exchange of Views ~

The challenge for today is to write a poem with a title drawn from one of these spaceship names by Mr Ian M Banks

I have chosen ‘Frank Exchange of Views’




‘Watching from the greater distance it seems

you are fine  and not feeling the sand rising

how beautifully curved are the dunes’

‘ Frank Exchange of Views

for sure you would not like to see

roaming  jumping staring of the roo’


you have a great historic future

leave inside the crawling creeps

bring out the new smew and kudu

Frank Exchange of Views

we can see sparks in the airscrew

make a safe landing among Hutu

or if you say go to Timbuktu


Oh no  we can manage with painful genu

nothing to devalue or evalue much to do

we can go to Gazankulu or land in Machu Picchu

tu-whoo tu- whoo tu- whoo tu- whoo

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