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NaPoWriMo ~ Day 11 ~ ‘O Nanga Parbat ! ~ A Tribute ~

And now, our prompt! Today I challenge you to write a tanka. This, like the “American” cinquain, is a poem based on syllables, with the pattern being 5-7-5-7-7. They work best when those final two 7-syllable lines contain a sort of turn or surprise that the first three lines might not wholly anticipate. You can string a bunch of them together to make a multi-stanza poem, or just write one!

To get you going, here’s an anonymous example from the Japanese, translated by Kenneth Rexroth:

On Komochi Mountain,
from the time the young leaves sprout,
until they turn red,
I think I would like to sleep with you.
What do you think of that?

A Tribute to Nanga Parbat !

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O Nanga Parbat !

Glory of the Northern Mountains

Majesty of Creation

stony white symbolic strength

Wish to see you forever’

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